woah, this is weird.
5/5 composition but mixing and sound design is like 2/5
actual trash, actually try next time and dont make some shitty meme
rest in peace
intro is great man. drums at the start could be more balanced (EQ or sample-wise. theyre too top heavy imo. the kick needs more bass and the snare needs more mid).
1:04. too much reverb/release. try making these sections super dry to contrast and make it stand out.
1:37. the repetition is kinda annoying tbh. try making it variated in either melody or percussion, or just add another layer.
section around 2:24 is great. the part after tho is just a repeat of earlier, you shouldve added more layers (or taken some away) or made it somehow more interesting.
i think 3:45 shouldve faded into the ending, honestly. and the part after, again, is a repeat.
overall, you tried really hard to make this super long, which made it less interesting. also in some parts mixing was a bit off. sorry if this doesnt make much sense or if it doesnt help very much
Thanks for the review. I don't know how apparent it is, but at 1:37 and in the third drop the percussion actually does change into a more hardcore style briefly. Honestly it doesn't really feel that repetitive to me, maybe it's just all those other random melody songs around that make it feel that way. I just kind of try to do it in a more traditional way, personally. I can't really pull off that random element the way other people can.
im 122% sure that this is the best song ive heard on ng
you should really come back to this style of music. itd be super great
intro needs work, but its really nice, especially the drums
I'm proud of this really simple music, could have done better though. Maybe I'll do a second version at some point
writing this as i listen
ooh, asmr intro
hell yeah that piano, nice af chords
nice whispering in the background, it adds more depth :)
gotta love the strings
1;17, maybe make the guitar or whatever a little more clear, i cant hear the chords very well. maybe its the muddiness, couldve been eq'd i guess
1:45 hell yeah, more orchestral parts
overall this is really short, but there are a lot of litle touches that make it really nice :D
mixing is pretty bad, but its not that bad of a song tbh
sound design: 6/10
melodies and stuff: 3/10 its all piano riffs
yall need to stop with the toe jam remakes. just s t o p
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