vocal work is good, everything else is kind of painful.
vocal work is good, everything else is kind of painful.
Honestly, this is probably one of the greatest songs i've ever heard. segment at 2:40 is a bit out of place, but its really nice and doesnt break too far from the rest of the song.
There are so many other amazing musicians out there. I appreciate the hyperbole though :). Makes me feel pretty damn good man. Funny you think 2:40 is out of place. . I always had the inkling that ~3:30 felt out of place. . . When the wall falls. Glad you dig so much though, I put some heart into it. Hope the rest of my stuff is equally as enticing.
this song is probably perfect. id live and die to this
Groovy! :)
chords are great but the sound design / mixing is a bit subpar
Yeah I suck at sound design
super warm <3
Thank you!
pretty boring, sounds are basic and it hardly progresses at all
Did you read the description? It says it has been made in 30 minutes, what can you expect?
P.S. I don't want to offend you in any way, i am just telling you this thing.
EDIT 2019:
Sorry for my 2017 arrogant persona. I'm assuring you that I've changed to a better person who doesn't hate on anybody that doesn't like my tracks.
Sorry again...
i keep coming back to this, its really nice and bubbly :)
learn how to eq. everything is too loud and top heavy
This isn't particularly louder than any of my other tracks, and besides some older dubstep I've never gotten this complaint... I'm kinda confused, I don't see anything wrong with it. In fact I EQ'd this quite a lot to convey a "filtered" feel. There's an automation clip on the big chords throughout which emphasizes the high end at the kick and low end at the snare. What do you mean by "top heavy" too...
I imagine you're trying to give constructive criticism, but it comes off as trying to be an insult to me (although I'm not saying that was your intention, I imagine not). I mean instead of saying "the EQ isn't very good" you say "learn how to EQ", implying I have no idea how to EQ, when I do. Even though I've done a bit of searching in the past, I never really found any "rules" to EQ-ing per se, so I can certainly believe my method isn't optimal; I've only based my mastering off of my own experiences so I certainly believe you when you tell me it's flawed, but why is it?
Ultimately, again I don't imagine this was your intention, but your criticism isn't very constructive... Like what's wrong with the EQ? Is it peaking too much? Do I need to reduce the high end? mid end? low end? Seriously, I would like to know. Maybe the "top heavy" part explains that, but again, I have NO idea what you mean, the only context I've ever heard the word "top-heavy" in is to describe fractions.
Could you please PM me what your problem with the EQ-ing is so I can improve, 'cause I'm gonna be honest I'm quite in the dark as how music is "supposed" to be made, and I'd genuinely like to know. I mean, I'm only 15, which is probably mostly I don't know this stuff; but I still have almost 4 years of experience, and I don't know whether what I learned is "correct" so to speak, since I'm mostly self-taught bar some SeamlessR videos...
really good! mixing is clean but the drums are a tad weak :( everything else is great, though
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